I'm Eliza Mars and I write contemporary romance and erotic romance novellas.

Sometimes I get distracted by reading a crazy shifter/vampire/gnome paranormal or a weepy cowboy saga, and then I start writing again.

Sunday, July 27, 2014

RWA14: Harlequin Presents - conflict research

If I saw you during RWA14 -- awesome! and howdy! and that's so cool you're here.   I would fist bump you if I was a person who fist bumped.  But I keep it classy.

During Sarah MacLean's workshop, entitled "Mastering the Art of Great Conflict", Sarah suggested that people who want to see conflict done well in an economical way should go to GoodReads at look up the Harlequin Presents.

My intro to Harlequin Presents was through the Smart Bitches, Trashy Books blog, where one of my all time favorite reviews -- for The Playboy Shiekh's Virgin Stable Girl -- was, a Harlequin Presents.  Take note: alpha male, exotic locale, and luxury (in the form of stable girl, I suppose?).

On Sarah's suggestion I went to Goodreads and found the list of "Best Harlequin Presents Novels." There's over 300, and tons of reader comments.

I'm going to scan the list and start reading, because I can barely get my characters from one side of a room to the other without bumping into furniture.  Which now I know is clumsiness, not conflict. Suggestions?

Monday, July 7, 2014

Country Music -- the Romance of the Music World

Great country music songs deliver an emotional story and a catchy hook in 2 minutes.  It also doesn't get a lot of respect.  Sound familiar?

If you're trying to write romance novellas, like I am, country music offers some key lessons along with its hilarious lyrics ("We're a two of a kind, working on a full house"? I mean who can sing that line without cracking up in glee?).

1. Amp the emotion.  Haters decry its sentimentality, but there's a reason I found myself tearing up as I listened to country music playing over the PA system in the Little Girls section of Kohl's (or as I like to call it, the "Lil' Hooker" section) -- and it wasn't the string bikinis with fringe in size 4T.

There's not a long time for build up of emotion in a novella, people. It's time for Once More, With Feeling, heavy on the Feeling, from the top.  This is hard for me, so I put it at #1.

Ruthie Knox's "Big Boy" was brilliant at this - from the beginning, you have an emotional tension that just clicks-clicks-clicks, like a rollercoaster that starts just 10 feet from the top.

2. Work the Cliches.  Like romance, country music has serious genre conventions that can't be avoided.  I think every album deal has a clause that demands songs about trucks, sundresses, and beer and/or whiskey, with multiplier bonuses for red trucks, red sundresses, and fried catfish with your beer and/or whiskey.

Great songs either revel in the cliches unapologetically and unironically, or turn the cliches on their head.

Just like with emotion, novellas don't have enough real estate for a teased out, nuanced twist on a cliche.  Use cliche, but deliver them in a unique voice.  Or go in stark reverse - the male librarian and the female sheriff.  Decide where you're going to play with the cliches and commit.  Delphine Dryden's "When in Rio" takes the hot demanding boss/juicy submissive underling cliche and delivers a surprisingly unconventional and sweet (and for me, tension-filled Until The Very Last Minute And I Almost Died) story.

3.  Heartbroken -- Down But Not Out.  The breakup song does both.  Taking a chainsaw to the tree where you carved your initials is gang-busters emotional (and potentially criminal). Breakup songs also reverse the genre cliche, because it turns out that even a red sundress can't stop a cheater.  Dammit.

Oh well - sometimes you're going through the Big D and you don't mean Dallas.

Obviously a romance novella will end on a happy note.  But starting a novella with a heroine brooding over TOTGA (yes, The One That Got Away) from years ago, or a hero left at the altar last night, kicks off the emotion, gives you a chance to work a cliche, and, neatly creates internal conflict. It's a three-fer.

The red elephant in the room (see what I did there?) is that country music can be off putting if you fall out of a narrow demographic -probably linked to these states.  But if you read romance and don't mind a little banjo in your morning commute, check it out.

Monday, September 2, 2013

How mixing up “telling” and “showing” confuses the reader: a case study to warn the unwary

Secondary characters can layer your plot with tension and add depth to your world.  Unlike the hero and heroine – who in theory deserve their HEA by the end of the book – the other characters’ fates are not predetermined.   Will the Plot B heroine get her guy? Does she deserve it?  Is she ally or double agent?  We don’t know.   Cue the music.  Da-da-da-DUM.

But “morally ambiguous character” is not the same as “wildly unpredictable plot fodder”.  If done intentionally, fine.  Sending mixed signals to other characters and the reader about a secondary character can reveal their internal conflict and build tension.  If done poorly – or worse, as the result of careless writing – such characters erode trust between you and your reader. 

My favorite example of confusion-done-well is not a character but the story structure of a movie.  In “Pulp Fiction” the scenes are in non-chronological sequence, but the audience is never truly confused – we know we’re in good hands.  The structure serves the story, and thus, we as viewers can relax and enjoy the ride. 
It’s different when we’re confused because the director or author isn’t delivering on their promise about a character – or can’t even articulate what the promise is.  

I’ve been kept up at night worrying - and not in a good way - about the fate of a secondary character, the wife of an alpha shifter in a Series That Shall Not Be Named.   She is a perfect example of how sending mixed signals backfires on the reader and undercuts the credibility of the morality of the world she lives in.  To protect the innocent, we’ll call her Rachel.

The setup:  Paranormal shifter series.  They live long or forever (as long as they don’t get the ol’ head chop choppy).  Sort of Urban Fantasy because there is one main couple throughout the series, but the point of view is third person and switches between a few characters.  The crime and the evidence, after the jump:

Sunday, July 21, 2013

#RWA13: awesome, awesome, awesome

Last night I cheered with 2000 other women for a book called "The Billionaire's Hypnotized Mistress" to win an award.  I looked around the ballroom and thought:  I have found my people, and they rock.

My first RWA conference was frankly mind-blowing.  Writers of genre fiction have a lonely time of it, and for 3 days I got to meet funny, smart and warm women who love the same books I do.  I survived my first pitch and went to my first book signing.    During the craft workshops, I figured out my revision game plan. The only advice I will ignore is to not use "awesome."  As a native Californian, I took that personally. 

Fellow first timers:  thanks for your support, especially to the person who helped me realize I was 12 floors away from my pitch appointment.   RWA14? I'm on to you.  Next time, I'll use GPS.

Saturday, July 6, 2013

Paranormal Romance: IN A WORLD…

Good paranormal romance universes set heroines up for conflict, and then let heroines battle and triumph against it – a lot like contemporary romance does for women today in the good ol’ U.S. of A.  I might not be a vampire assassin in my day job, but I can relate to someone who is too tired to wipe the blood off her stakes at the end of the day. 

In fact, I love paranormal romance and urban fantasy because of the world-building -- my favorite usually take on a certain challenge contemporary life, then force me to look at the issue with a different focus or more intensity.  Shifter romances explore what it means to have consciousness and live in modern world but at the same time be an animal and connect with natural world.   Demon and angel worlds throw moral issues in sharp relief.  Vampire romances usually involved a highly evolved culture or sub-culture, with its own rituals, fashions and traditions while helping us understand the transitory and often irrational cultural traditions we ourselves follow.    Vampire worlds also tend to explore class issues, because there’s usually a strict hierarchy or nobility structure.   Worlds with multiple races, like the Psy-Changeling series, let authors confront racial stereotypes and look at racial conflict in a way that would be difficult in a straight-ahead contemporary romance.

I’m fascinated by world-building partly because I came to romance as a refugee from science fiction.  Too often science fiction authors (usually male) can envision a world with breathtaking technology, but not a world where men and women were equal.  I read one book where some men investigating a space ship accident found a woman’s remains in the wreckage.  They shrugged and dispensed with her life and death in one sentence:  clearly she was the ship’s prostitute.  No mystery there.  Women fared even worse in another book, where females of a feline race women weren’t sentient.  Literally, the women were animals that that men fed, rutted into, and, one hopes, dewormed.    And… I’m outta here folks.  No thanks.

So it was strange to switch to romance, only to find that many of the worlds women authors were creating weren’t that great for women, either.  Some were, of course.  It’s challenging to generalize about romance genre, because the sheer volume of available source material will overwhelm you.  You could spin any number of hypotheses and find an example to support it. 

Today I’m thinking about two classic vampire series, the Black Dagger Brotherhood and Midnight Breed, because they both set up a universe at the beginning of the series where women are highly oppressed, and then go in different directions.    

7th Inning Stretch is Over. Play ball!

I wrote this blog for a month and had big plans for future posts.  Then I was hit by one of those tiresome curve balls life throws at us sometimes – two, actually.  Funny how right after I make a plan or voice an opinion, something happens to remind me I’m not in control and don’t know as much as I think I do.   Thanks, curve ball.  Lesson learned. Now, no more, 'kay? I have stuff to write.

Luckily, these particular two roadblocks gave me time to read some romance books – most of them compelling and heart stopping, and a few listless and downright depressing.   Which always gets me thinking - why? Why do I love some books and am challenged by others?

Then I had the good fortune to have lunch with another writer.  Afterward we started talking in a windy parking lot about a paranormal romance series we both had read and loved, the Black Dagger Brotherhood.  I said that I loved some female characters and books in the series, and was completely annoyed and frustrated by others.  I couldn't quite put my finger on why at the time.  

But while I was under strict doctor orders that boiled down to Lie in Bed; Stare at Ceiling, I had time to ponder and mull about the windy parking lot conversation and why I like or dislike certain paranormal books.  I think the key is world building.  

So I'm back, I'm writing, I have a post going up soon, and then I'm running out to buy a baseball glove.

Monday, April 15, 2013

Breaking the rules - very, very, carefully

Half of the world says, "follow the rules," and the other half yells "they're really more like guidelines!" and as a writer we have to suck it up and make a game-time decision.

Sucks is right.  

I reread a draft of a contemporary I wrote about two years ago.  I love it, and I love the heroine and hero, but talk about unmarketable.  Yowza.  Both lead characters are working through serious problems, part of the plot revolves around cryptography (oh, you sexy storyline advancer you!), and the hero makes a Big Mistake.

One of the conventions of romance is that the hero does not sleep with anyone else after meeting the heroine.  

I'm not sure how much this is discussed, but I'm hard put to think of a romance book where this happens aside from Second Chance Romance, or the "I've been friendzoned for 10 years but damn it I'm going to make my play!" books.  Both of which I love.  This book is neither of those.  

As a reader, I'll come out and say I don't like it when this rule is broken.  I'm a vociferous Heroine Advocate.  As a writer, the Big Mistake is very important and I forgive the hero, most importantly the heroine forgives the hero, and I hope that readers would forgive the hero.  Romance needs diversity and rule-stretching just like any other genre.

As a veteran of the Amazon comment wars, I don't have a lot of optimism it will work.

/smallvoice But I think I'll keep it the way it is /endsmallvoice.